Poem - Fragment: War

[thebigdelay]

Fragment: War

The early death of war grips you like eternity.
Bullets fly dense salvos into your mind,
the dark deepens and pitches:
your eyes roll like tanks
across a fractured empire…

Photograph by liujingjing201609, courtesy of Pixabay

Comments

[annesaya]

great poem :-)

[foodie.warrior]

Good poem..poignant words..

[thebigdelay]

Thanks :)

[vegannomadchick]

very nice 👌

[thebigdelay]

Thanks :)

[kirst-willoz]

i love this !

[theblindsquirl]

So, where did you see combat?

[robyneggs]

Heavy...I like. Thank you for sharing @thebigdelay1
I curate poetry with the tag #onehumanbasket
Find out about it here where there is also a poetry dice challenge!

[thebigdelay]

Thanks, that means a lot to me. Ah great, I'll check out your tag and competition :)