The life here appears frozen, like a picture that is near-immutable, except that one other may do the moving which may transform everything back to life. Your words flow through the scene with potential and life. Really beautiful. I count myself fortunate to have found your poem and in some small way, become part of it.
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Thank you friend, I'm so glad you got so much out of it!
Ah man! You can't be as glad as I was. Thank you for the support. It means a lot.