Maybe I did not make myself clear, As I read your poem I went in deeply and lived the story you presented and I was still inside of your story when I replied to your post, you did not do anything wrong. It's'when I don't comment at all that you know I did not like it. And even then you should own your creation. If you wrote it you should love it and fight for it fiercely. That will cause others on more ocassions than less to do a double take and show you respect, @acrowland.
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oh thank you. I have not written poetry in many years. I am kind of coming back to it. So I don't think I am very good at it. I read other's poems and I am god-smacked at most pieces and then look at mine and the results I am getting and that kind of re-enforces my negativity speak I find I am hearing in my head. I am always looking to improve so I try to take any comments to heart and try to improve what I am writing. So thank you for the clarification.