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RE: (EN) A TRIBUTE POEM : BROTHERS

in #poetsunited6 years ago

Hey, good to see you posting again dude :) That fourth stanza is wicked - so many strong images it just knocks you back. I love the way it builds up towards a kind of ecstasy and then stops so suddenly with that last stanza, reflecting the bitter tragedy of it all. Really, a brilliant tribute.

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Thank you very much Lazarus, your analysis really reflects my intent! Dorian was a brilliant poet and a beautiful human being.