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Thanks for reading and commenting.
If I'd been writing it as a normal piece I would have gone into a lot more detail regarding DARPA etc and background stories of the protagonists but I think I got the message across.

Yes, surprisingly as short as it was it all came together. maybe its because I already have so much world knowledge on this that my mind filled in a LOT OF DATA but I think everyone reading this series is in a similar boat so it worked perfectly!

Congrats on a very efficient success!