Oh goodie. This looks exciting and just like my cup of tea, so am bookmarking for a little later. I've heard amazing things about Sapolsky, though have yet to delve deeper into his stuff. This might be just the thing, right?
Also, I'm impressed with how thorough your research is for a story. And speaking of which, I'm gonna go read yours. :)
I look forward to your thoughts on both! The story I link here isn't the one - I'm still thoroughly thinking and ... thinking about thinking about how I'm going to write a story without any free will.
I hope that you use your "free will" - whatever that is, to coerce me into future responses on these topics.
Also, if you get really bored, go read the reddit thread where this post was shared - there's an enormous amount of stuff for me to digest from the comments there, too :)