You've got another good episode, @zentalk. It increases the intrigue, the tension over Albright's mission. Your description of the spaces and secondary participants of the story allow to visualize the atmosphere of this ruinous place, mixture of city of the future with decadence and repulsion. The passing scenes on the street food are a pathetic demonstration of that nauseating world. In addition, I think devices or technological elements are well incorporated. Pending the new installment of your science fiction story. Greetings.
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Yes, I hope you were able to really see the despair in the colony. The lack of cleanliness, civility, the poverty of the people. Where the classes are even more separated than they are today. The rats and dogs for sale, reserved for the middle class almost. The technology that divides and conquers the masses. It is my hope you'll understand the one eyed man, liking him or approving of his lifestyle may be too far for most to go. The new installment is scheduled. Thanks for following along!