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RE: #sixwordstory contest #3

in #sixwordstory6 years ago

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He did not aspire to much .. Most of what the boy wanted a spacious house to help him and his family .. And wife look with satisfaction and affection to him .. And young children run him joyful say Baba returned! From a simple job he loves and masturbates ..
His dreams remained suspended between heaven and earth

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I love the story but you went a bit over the 6-word limit here. We need to feel the story in 6 words. You've got 'oluru var mi' (Do you have a case) also written in the image.