Haha yeah I'm being pretty hypocritical with this post, I'm entirely guilty of what I wrote above. But like if its say a fiction piece and everyone was commentin' havin fun' talkin' bout their favourite characters (impressively while simultaneously rolling around in ecstasy) and shit even the most minor constructive criticism would have the tonal equivalent of taking a shit in front of the line of registers at Walmart.
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. . .taking a shit in front of the line of registers at Walmart.
LMFAO
Scene: The young author has just published his first novel to critical acclaim. His closest friends and family have come over to celebrate. He never thought it would actually happen. He never thought he could stop and not think, feel, "This is good."
Enter Mitthradiumn with the author's dog's severed head atop a pike
Mitthradiumn: Personally I feel the dialogue was still a little contrived