Wow. Thank you so much for this thorough feedback!! It was great having the opportunity again to let some Splinterlands creativity flow, the writing contest seems ages ago!
A storm of small arrows was loosed by the Brownies, who had assembled in full ranks at the forest's edge. Earth Elementals flung bough, limb and branch toward the attackers while the Forest Spirits worked together to generate a powerful psychic barrier. A force of Mitica Headhunters charged from the forest with silver spears aglow in the reflection of lightning flashes.
And that's why you're the Loremaster! :) Perfect description! I struggle a little bit with more descriptive scenes, since english is not my native language and in normal day life most of the english I read is technical one. Nevertheless, the constructive criticism will help me for sure in improving my writing on the next lore atempt. Thank you again, and cheers! !BEER
I'm very impressed to learn that you're not a native English speaker!
English is the only language I've ever really known. Well done!
Heheh thanks! I'm from Portugal, and although I speak portuguese during work I do have a lot of english speaking clients, and most of the stuff I have to study is in english, so I have lots of opportunities to practice. Plus, I love fantasy worlds. And I know I've said it before, but... you're really doing an awesome job! Keep that lore coming! 😉