If there's one field that needs the transparency and security provided by blockchain, it's the realm of finance. In these days of late-stage capitalism, there's been so much financial chicanery, and that has to be stopped. The clarity of blockchain will surely help.
Editorial note – There's no expanded version of the short-form "defi", although you did finally mention "decentralized digital finance" near the end. For clarity, a writer should always ensure that all short forms and acronyms are expanded, preferably on the first instance. Otherwise, your readers may get confused, and will very likely abandon reading the post.
Thank you for that great advice, my brother.
Do you think I should edit it, right?
Yes, my process is ... write, then edit continually, cuz it's never yet perfect. :-)
Thanks, teacher.