if you say that there's something wrong, comment abot it
You say you have no time to waste in learning what your mistakes are, but also, that I should spell out what your mistakes were. Why should I?
People will see your post, my comment, maybe look again at your post and laugh at you and then - walk away from this person who openly admits he has no time for learning to improve his marketing skills and posts. As a clue, in the last paragraph there are 3 glaring errors - plus bad use of English.
It is weird how people like you think. If you had the courtesy to reply nicely, asking what the errors are or welcoming corrections, I would have gone out of my way to help you.
However, I do not help arrogant p****s.