I prefer the look and feel of the first one , but it is full of misspellings and improper use of English - PLEASE don't use that one, because it will turn off people like me, who value the proper use of English.
The second one is mildly annoying, but at least everything is spelled correctly, and it is a far better representation of Steemit than the first.
I am a native English speaker, have worked professionally as an editor and proofreader, and am willing to lend assistance in proofreading the copy the next time you put together something like this.
It might save a lot of hassle, since obviously both parties who worked on the videos put a lot of time and effort in, which would have better put to use with English that was correct from the start.
Steem on, everyone!
Yes Please add native speach, misic is not good