hey there, as far as i can see you added more bulletpoints and images, but the body of the post is not improved, i'm finishing my shift now can you improve the text on this post otherwise i'll have to refuse it.
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I'll update a little more.
I've modified my post. Please review it, again.
you missed out 'please' on the end. it's already live thou? verified.
Thank you so much : )