Hey i like where you are going with what you're saying but i think you should use grammarly because it was a struggle to read what you wrote. Alternatively you could right in your language.
But then again i could be wrong and to just persevere with writing in English to practice and get better.
Things that are worthwhile are worth the struggle @sebklay.
Upvoted your post as i feel it's an honest content.
Thanks for the feedback.