Thank you for your feedback, if I understand you right I have to change the following aspects;
- The transparency, I have to show who won and what they won.
- What you could have won.
- Show more about a number of participants and so on.
Am I right?
Milank
That is half of it.
The other half is making it look exciting. You are selling a possible dream.
You have to make that dream seem real to the audience you are engaging.
So, if you take the normal sales pitch given lotteries, it will turn off most of the people here.
You will need to work out how this audience finds appealing for future winnings.