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@rvag5 - You have created a wonderful freestyle haiku! You have done extremely well and enjoy the positive words you have used.

If you want to create a more formal one you should count the syllables and not the words

Hi @rvag5, to ensure you make a Haiku with the correct syllable counts of 5-7-5, here's the website that I used every time to ensure the correct syllable counts https://www.howmanysyllables.com/words/. I hope this will help you to make more great Haikus. Have fun with Haikus :D