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RE: Fifty-Word Fiction Frenzy: A Community Collaboration

in #steemit7 years ago

I was sitting at the bus stop trying to get the courage up to talk to the reed-thin dreadlocked chick selling bracelets. The gunshot startled me. A split second later, I screamed as I heard the high whine of the bullet slice the air next to my cheek. A blur of bruising movement, and I was cowering behind the trashcan with the wide-eyed bracelet babe. Bond would have said something witty. All that came out of my mouth was, “Shit!”

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This is superb writing. I really hope you participate in the following stages of this project,

Thanks! fun initiative you have started!