@pardinus, you are good story writer. When I started read the first two sentence, it attracted me want to read more and more until it finish. Tell you the truth, I hope it won't end so fast. Now i must complain, your story too short for my reading pleasure :) Hope to read more of your story in future. Good luck with your contest.
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Haha! Thank you so much for the feedback! I tried the keep it a not that long story, but truth is it feels a little short to me too ;) Will continue to join the contest for sure!