Appreciate your writing skills in this post.... You have written down the story perfectly but only thing which I can't see here in your story is lack of suspense (curiosity) ,, what was your aim of writing..... I appreciate you created your own work.... Keep up the good work
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Thank you very much for your honest feedback...will try to work upon your inputs.
Pleasure.... If you get something better with my help it will be a great honour for me... Stay blessed and be healthy part of steemit community...