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RE: ADSactly Short Story - The Pull of the Pool.

in #story5 years ago

A story so well told that it caught me to the end. The construction of the characters speaks to us of positive and optimistic people and other pessimists. We see that there are people full of problems and terrible experiences that do not allow themselves to be defeated as easily as in the case of Ada. With respect to Nkasi, I perceive her, at first, disappointed, sad and worried about the fate that has touched her. Without work and with a family burden to attend to, but there is a good gesture in her when, generously, she offers help to the beggar, not everything is lost. I feel that she was on the brink of depression, on the brink of falling into an abyss, but there is always a light that comes to save. Hopefully the encounter with Ada has turned Nkasi's life upside down, and she has been able to resolve her precarious situation. In the midst of adversity you have to have firm hope, everything can change in an instant. I loved this story, @royalrose. Thanks to @adsactly for sharing it.

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I appreciate you sharing your thoughts on this. Your perceptions are correct. Thank you.