Balkan story challenge #steemitbalkan PART #9

in #story6 years ago (edited)

Soundtrack for this post: Laura Marling - What He Wrote

Yesterday I was nominated by @exanime15 to continue @steembalkan story challenge.

Rules of the challenge:
Continue the plot within 24 hours after you have been nominated.
Minimum 100 words.
At the end of the post nominate who will continue the plot.

Previous parts:

1st Part by @steembalkan
2nd Part by @spalatino
3rd Part by @svarozich
4th Part by @zija2022
5th Part by @gingergeorge
6thPart by @schkure
7th Part by @zen-art
8th Part by @exanime15

Last sentence from @exanime15...

A beautiful creature with long blue hair and big red eyes. She took his breath away. Inovator knew who she was. Half an angel, half a woman...

As a young boy, his grandfather used to tell him stories about alien creatures that sometimes visit us and fall out from the sky. His grandfather used to call them angels and he always had this special glow in his eyes when he told him about them but Inovator always thought it was just bedtime stories right until now when one of those creatures stand in front of him.

Angel: Greetings Young inovator.

Inovator: Who are you, what's your name, What are you doing here??

Angel: easy with the questions we don't have much time I use almost my entire energy to come to the Earth through the Portal. My name is EMINAXE And I'm the 1st of the five rulers from my planet, we used to have the same problem as you do now with the artificial intelligence But somehow we managed to survive and we won the war. now we use portals to help you but it drains are life energy so we can do it only once every couple of years. This time I managed to bring you this special device use it carefully because it can help you sense the approaching danger and it can also help you find a way. don't ever let it fall into the wrong hands!

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Inovator approached the angel and took the device She smiled at him and vanished in a bright white light. Inovator covered his eyes with his right hand. When the lights fade away he lowered his hand and saw Jenny lying In front of him on the floor with the blood coming from her ears. She was knocked down by the energy when the portal opened.
He ran towards her, drop to his knees and feels her neck to check for the pulse. Her pulse was very weak but she was still alive. So he took a deep breath and put his mouth on hers and start resuscitation. After a few breaths Jenny regains consciousness. Instinctively she put her arms around his neck and hug him.

Jenny: What happened??

Inovator: Don't worry about that I will tell you in the morning. try to keep calm now and rest.

He covered her with his jacket, And they spend the night together Jenny never felt so secure in her entire life.

NEXT PART...
I would like to nominate @cubanolux to continue this story in 24 hours!

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Trebalo bi grupu preimenovat u udruga pisaca :D

@chr0nix care! Jenny nije mrtva! weeeeeeeeee
Odlično si napisao, stvarno odlično!

Fala @zen-art normalno da nije hahaha idemo dalje :-)

Poludit će čovik s pustim ženama.

Ubrzali ste tempo.

Jel Eminaxe došla iz Exanime? 😂
Odličan nastavak!Jedva čekam dalje 😎👍

A je i prva je od pet ako si skužila hahahah nisan ništa pametnije moga smislit, a pošto si me ti uvalila u ovo eto ti :-)