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RE: "Alora's Tale" - Malaki Anthology #9 - Worldbuilding Excerpt

in #story6 years ago

I like how the story is becoming more and more exciting. From reading a book to quickly flying to save Kayde. I'm glad that he got on board and I wonder now what will happen next. You made me curious :)

Thank you for sharing. Your writing is very pleasant to read :)

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Thank you! I’ll wrap up this miniature arc at some point, as it’s tangential to my main narrative (reverse tangent, it merges with the main narrative later instead of branching from it!).

Thanks for stopping by and your kind words! There’s more to be read on http://incorruptiblebook.com/

Cheers,

~ Mako