Okay, now that I'm caught up, I'm pretty hooked.
I see the angle starting to form here of "does the journalist just record, or to they intervene in the hope of improving the situation?" - as well as strong pacing, something interesting constantly happening, and the stakes being incrementally driven higher toward the sky. :)
The words flew by. Don't know how long it took me to read, but not long :)
I'm glad to hear it's holding your interest! It's so easy to write long-fiction when you're focused on making each serialized segment its own three acts. We'll see how this goes but I think this could be my next novel. : )