Surprising ending! Great read for sure Max, enjoyed that! Constructive criticism? All I would say is you can use words to describe certain details which would aid in striking a reader's emotions. Other than that, it was a great read, smooth flow.
Nice one man :) Keep up the writing for sure.
Thanks so much for reading! Glad you enjoyed it! Yeah, I am always working towards being able to show instead of tell. Appreciate the feedback!
Man I have this feeling!! Your writing's going to be huge one day. Keep it coming man and may the gusts of writing success warm you up on the cold and dreary nights! :D
Cheerrrsssss
Now that would be amazing! All I can do is keep going, I appreciate the encouragement!
Absolutely! Steem On Max :)
Have a lovely rest of the weekend