5 MINUTES FREEWRITE: THE ATTIC

in #story7 years ago

Hey guys @ladybirddd, thanks to @marrianewest for this innovative idea and @pasaift for introducing me to the freewrite community.
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To everyone else, the attic was the scariest place in the house but not for Errien, it was there she found peace, waiting in the dark of the night for everyone to sleep she crept down to the attic.

It was the best place for her seeing as she was able to be with Peter, the love of her life there, he was the cook of the house and her parents would rather die than see her be with him. So every night, they would both go do to the attic and spend time with each other and no one thought to look for them in the attic.

Their luck ran out when Errien's father came looking for his tool box and caught them in each others arms. He didn't hesitate to kill Peter. From there on out, the attic was the most scary place for Errien.

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WOW! Never make Dad mad? :D

You have worked very hard today and now it's time to relax your mind while doing today's 5-minute Freewrite prompt! Prompt: Plaid

Woah!! Harsh judgement. Nice writing

Wow. Killed him just like that....

Yep....lets say he took strictness to a whole new level