Good Halloween story. A bright end! I would have used less dialogue but you did very well. A pleasure to have read. Regards @litguru
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Good Halloween story. A bright end! I would have used less dialogue but you did very well. A pleasure to have read. Regards @litguru
Good point, @marcybetancourt. A bit of trimming would have helped, but Halloween is getting closer. Thank you for reading!