I like that you're continuing this story. I think you can get a lot out of it. The theme lends itself to good development. I'm struck by how Evan only calls his friend Sam and not someone closer to him, which may indicate that he has no family and perhaps that is one of the reasons he was selected for this mission. Likewise, his closeness to his neighbor tells me that he is nice, but he is a lonely boy.
I loved it, as always. Keep writing and don't go to Mars. Hahaha. Hugs.
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Thank you Nancy! I'm really getting into it and an excited to see where it leads. I felt like if Evan had anything more than casual connections and friendships then it would be much more difficult for him to make the decision to leave. Unfortunately, these days, there are to many people like this without deep social connections. I have enough close connections that I won't be blasting off on a Starship anytime soon. : ) Thanks again and I hope you have a good evening!