I read this completely..There are many real life stories similar to this ..you should have written that.There is a lot to improve in your writing...There is no feeling while reading..You could have bettered had if took some more time.
I read this completely..There are many real life stories similar to this ..you should have written that.There is a lot to improve in your writing...There is no feeling while reading..You could have bettered had if took some more time.
okay, thanks for your feedback.