I think this platform is a little more flexible. There aren't really any set rues when it comes down to the art of writing and literature. A poem doesn't have to rhyme, it doesn't even have to make sense.
I re-read the part you pointed out and I agree with you that there should be a break there, but I also agree with myself that it didn't need one.
I suppose what I'm saying is don't be too harsh when you're checking articles. I assume you're supposed to be enjoying it too. My advice is sit back a little and enjoy it more. :)
Haha - so now you need to write an article on "Take it easy when reading unedited articles." ; )
There's an idea! :)