Okay, this is a well written story. Permit me to say this but the ending wasn't very okay, but still, i love the story. I found it hard to just scroll to the end and just click on the upvote icon(not that i do that), every line just grabbed my attention and i was eager to find out "what next"??? Kudos!!! You did great. As a suggestion, it would be nice if you could write another part of this story; you could start from where you stopped or better still make chapters from the story(as many chapters as you want) whereby you could post a new chapter everyday. I know it's tasking but i trust your creativity.