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RE: What Admission Committees Look for in the Opening Paragraphs of an Application Essay

in #students5 months ago

First impressions really do shape everything—even in writing. I still remember the chill I got from an essay that opened with, “The day my house caught fire wasn’t the scariest day of my life—it was the quiet that followed.” That kind of opener grabs you. Authentic voice and a personal twist make all the difference when your words are all you’ve got to stand out. For anyone unsure how to channel that spark effectively, I found EssayShark super helpful—especially when turning raw ideas into something that actually resonates.