Well done, @dirge. The story does a nice job of meeting all the requirements including the 750+ words and the three-part structure with the story arc. I really like the story premise. It really gave me the shivers to imagine being stuck in that dark maze, especially with those creepy Invisibles that eat people! I was glad to read that the structure was crumbling toward the end.
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Hello. As always, thanks for reading and commentary