The Spot Re-birth On Hive

in #thespot โ€ข 4 years ago

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The sun was going down. It was getting dark now.
Peter picked up the pennies from the cloth that he placed on the ground. And he then put the piece of cloth in his
left pocket. He also rolled the paper that he placed on his right side. He placed the paper in such a manner that the
people can see it well. The paper was containing a note.


๐’ซ๐“๐‘’๐’ถ๐“ˆ๐‘’ ๐ป๐‘’๐“๐“… ๐‘€๐‘’! ๐‘€๐“Ž ๐’ฎ๐’พ๐“ˆ๐“‰๐‘’๐“‡ ๐’พ๐“ˆ ๐’ฎ๐’พ๐’ธ๐“€.


He went to buy some food on the way to the store. He counted out the pennies that he collected that day. It was
just 25 pennies. Half of what he used to collect daily. He was very sad because he knew that it's not enough to
buy his sister medicine.


He also knew there's nothing to eat at home. So, he went to the store and buy two pieces of bread. One for himself
and one for his sister. It was 10 mins of the walk back home. He reached the doorstep. He called her sister.

LIZA! OPEN UP! PLEASE!

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The door was finally open. It was liza. She was looking worse than how peter left her in the morning. Tiny arms,
One could see her bones and veins greenish in color.
Hey Peettt....! She said with a very weak and slow tone. Why are you so late today?
Peter just slightly hiding the pain inside his heart.
It was just that I was counting the pennies today. They were double so It made me late to come home early.


She looked at Peter and then looked away. Don't lie my little champ. You know, You don't actually know how

to lie. And the lie is not for you. I don't know if I can survive the upcoming days but you have to be strong.

You have to face the world. You have to be a good person my little brother. I sometimes think what will you do.

After I'm no more. She sat at the chair broken. Her eyes wanted to cry but there was not any water left.


She eats the bread half. And she was steering the broken roof for a while. Then her eyes closed slowly.


Peter ate all of the bread. And laid on the floor.


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Peter felt that someone is watching him from outside his house. There were cracks in the walls and a broken
window through which one could see peter and his sister from outside. Peter gets up slowly. He didn't want
her sister to wake up. Because she was sick. He slow with small steps walks to the window. A lady with a
white hat on her head standing at a distance from his house.


She was looking at peter. Peter was a bit scared but she was wearing a good dress. So, peter thought maybe
she's lost. And he should help her get to the place she wants to.


Peter! Hi Mam... You may be lost! This place is poor people well. where do you want to go?
The Lady; " No I'm not lost actually I was here to take something from you.
And now I'm leaving.
Peter; That's fascinating. But why are you leaving so fast why don't you ask me what you want?

And I will give that to you! But the thing that's questioning my mind. What such thing I have that you are here for?
The Lady; came near to peter and said " Look peter you're a brave boy. And you have to be strong no
matter what happens. Okay. show me your hands."
Peter did as she said!

The Lady " I'm gonna take her from you okay. And You just have to be strong. She is too weak and

she is in a lot of pain. Your new morning is going to be not the same your going to have your parents"


Peter; Who are you talking about? Who are you taking away? And my parents are dead they can't be Back!

You Are At The Wrong SPOT!


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The Lady; " No Peter! I'm at the Right One. And remember one thing, Peter. People always think they are not
standing at the right spot both the rich and poor will say the same thing. They just want to skip what they don't
like in life. But Peter Little Champ! Every spot has a big impact on life. You have to make every spot the right
one for yourself.


Peter in rush to say something.. But stopped, Looked back to his house. And run back home as he has something

very important to get. So, important that he has no time for anyone.
He got the lady Point " Little Champ" That was what his sister Liza use to call him. And it was just between him

and her sister. He knew that the lady was here to take his sister away. And to check if she is in the house he rushes
and opens the door. His sister was on the chair sleeping. He turns back. The Lady gets disappeared into the woods.
He runs for the lady back and says stop! Please! The Lady converts into a shining spirit and flies in a burst of light
in the woods. Peter finds himself lonely. Because he's now standing on the wrong Spot dark and scary.

He feels that something heavy puts his hand on him. He feels like he's unable to move. He tries to run but can't.
He tries to shout but his voice gets mute. He screams in but the loud screams seem to be very low that he could

hear his heartbeat louder than his screams. The Darkness slowly captures his eyes Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

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(Pixabay.com)


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He opens up his eyes. And get's up from the dream. Ah! Ah! Crying!
Peter Looks at her sister. He went close to her to wake her up. But she just doesn't move.
Peter; Liza! Liza wake up! Liza...
The slow normal motion of peter to wake her upconverts into screams and tears. Wake Up!

Lizaaaa! Lizaaaa!


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In the morning Peter opens his eyes. Looking for his sister here and there. A Police Cop came in.

Hy little Boy. What's your name?

Peter; I'm Peter. Where is my sister?

Police Cop; Hidding something... " She's actually sick and we take her to a hospital to do her treatment.

And there is some that want to meet you, Peter."

Peter; Meet Me?

Police Cop; Yes! Here they are! Miss Lily and Mr. Jhon.

Miss Lily; Hi! Peter, I'm Your Mom.

Mr. Jhon; And I'm Your Dad Peter. We are here to take you Home.

Peter; looks at them and starts crying shouting to meet her sister. But No! use!

He's just forced to go with Miss Lily And Mr. Jhon.

Peter Crying..............


After 4 years when Peter turns 20. He finally came to know that the day his new parents bring him here.

That day His Sister Liza Passed away. But he thinks that maybe his sister finds a right SPOT now!

She might not be in pain anymore.
And he laughs with a very delightful smile at the same time little tears in his eyes.
He gets downstairs. Grab the keys to his new car. And Says bye to her Mom.


" ๐•‹๐•™๐•– ๐”ผ๐•Ÿ๐•• "

" ๐“•๐“ธ๐“ป๐“ฝ๐“พ๐“ท๐“ฎ ๐“ฒ๐“ผ ๐“ต๐“ฒ๐“ด๐“ฎ ๐“ช ๐“ฝ๐“ป๐“ช๐“ฒ๐“ท. ๐“˜๐“ฝ ๐”€๐“ฒ๐“ต๐“ต ๐“ข๐“ฝ๐“ธ๐“น ๐”‚๐“ธ๐“พ ๐“ช๐“ฝ ๐“ถ๐“ช๐“ท๐”‚ ๐“ผ๐“ฝ๐“ช๐“ฝ๐“ฒ๐“ธ๐“ท๐“ผ.

๐“‘๐“พ๐“ฝ ๐“ž๐“ท๐“ต๐”‚ ๐“จ๐“ธ๐“พ ๐“ด๐“ท๐“ธ๐”€ ๐”€๐“ฑ๐“ช๐“ฝ'๐“ผ ๐”‚๐“ธ๐“พ๐“ป ๐“ข๐“Ÿ๐“ž๐“ฃ ๐“ฝ๐“ธ ๐“ฐ๐“ฎ๐“ฝ ๐“ญ๐“ธ๐”€๐“ท ๐“ธ๐“ฏ ๐“ฝ๐“ฑ๐“ฎ ๐“ฝ๐“ป๐“ช๐“ฒ๐“ท."

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