What an extensive and lengthy travel post! Loved the horses haha. Great that you are posting your work to Steemit! =)
I thought, why not contribute myself to the community by showing how I would edit the work posted to Steemit!
Let me know if you like or dislike my edit! Lets get some actual discussion started on our great platform, instead of the superficial: "great post" or "beautiful picture" comments =)