You have a minor grammatical mistake in the following sentence:
NO 6, New York City, New York is the Capital capital of the world an has been my favourite place to call home for some time now, any time of the year is actually the best time to visit New York, but if I had to chose I would pick early summer or late fall although there is no place like New York in the winter with a little snow on the ground, New York has something for everyone, it's a place where you come to make your dreame come true, trust me.It should be to choose instead of to chose.
Thank you so much for pointing out that grammatical error, will do well to proread before posting next time, all the same am truly greatfull