RE: My first attempt at writing a fiction story - Sally and Arpito

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blog-beginner (57)in #twentyfourhourshortstory • 8 years ago

Thanks for your feedback @henry-gant.
May I ask what went wrong ? Just so that I can improve myself and learn from my mistakes.

8 years ago in #twentyfourhourshortstory by blog-beginner (57)

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