Ukiah/haiku - new challenge!

in #ukiahhaiku6 years ago (edited)

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@japhofin8or has challenged us Steemian poets to break free from the normal haiku form and embrace something different. I just loved his idea to try something other than 7-5-7. The excitement level has peaked over an 11-8-11. Chosen theme: Nature.

I need commitment in my life, don't you see?
Nurturing the human nature
Has left me questioning serendipity.

11-8-11 #ukiahhaiku
By @robyneggs
Copyright January 26th, 2018
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Put that in your pipe and smoke it..Here's the link to the original challenge by @japhofin8or: Hey! Checkout blog post on eSteem! esteem://poetry/@japhofin8or/ukiah-haiku-poetry-challenge-with-a-twist

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This is fantastic, it's absolutely splendid!

Thank you @evgsk! Your positive words are so encouraging. :-) Cheers~!