Thanks. I'd appriciate it if you take the time to show me some improvements. the blogposts are practice for me to get better with writing. I tried to implement the last suggestions of you so I'm always happy to get improvements
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Hello!
I will cite a few examples for you:
Let me rephrase that: "We are back again with a weekly report of what happened in the QUIQQER universe."
This would be a better sentence: "Each possibility to observe different logins feels like searching for the needle in the haystack."
This sentence would be a better sentence: "Even though this means more stress for us, we test our software on our own body, and have no other choice but to fix it and make it executable."
I hope you will find this comment useful.