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your video is a good effort in introducing utopian and what it stands for, there are few things that can be improved in your video, if you can fix them your contribution would be well worthy of the reward.
- when you add a frame around the video you need to make sure it's distance is equal from all sides, it seems that there is more black padding on the sides than top and below.
- (optional) in the first set of text you can make "open source project" bigger to show it's importance also making it easier to read in the default youtube player size
- the second set of text is kind of the same as the first, you can remove them to make the whole videos message catchier
- you can change: "like fixing bugs" to "like finding or fixing bugs" to let people know utopian also rewards finding bugs
- you can remove "texts" from the fourth set of texts, only the word translating will convey all of the meaning required
- you can remove or from "or sharing good ideas" since the list still have more items, the words "and" and "or" come just before the last item in a list.
- (optional) you can add "creating tutorials" somewhere in the list
- at the end the phrase "open source economy" is too small to read.
- it would help people know utopian is a website if you add a link "https://utopian.io" in middle of screen at the end when everything fades to black
I hope that's not to much to ask, let me know if you had any problem or question
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Thanks @kiaazad. That's lots of work, but I'll surely make the amendments and re-upload.
@kiaazad, I've made all necessary amendments sir
thank you, your post will be approved soon,
I hope to see a big improvement in your skills for your next contirbution
Thanks sir