Hi lemouth.
The "room for improvement" comment is related to your post format; although, the used language is clear and the format is consistent, there are some portions in the presentation that could look better:
- Writing commands outside the general text can make reading even easier.
- The command object1.dr(object2) allows us to evaluate....
- through the command PHYSICS->Isol->JetCleaning(MyJets, MyElectrons, 0.2). This ...
These are some examples in which the commands have been including into the general text. I think that write commands in independent lines will let your post to looks much better.
- Attached images can be used to separate big lots of text. This will make reading easier and allow the contribution to look more orderly. I think that two columns structure is not meeting this goal. Images look small and surrounded by a lot of text, and, in some cases, the text in the another column looks a little messy.
These are small observations that can make your contributions look much better. I apologize for not having been sufficiently descriptive in my first comment. Your series is of quite quality and we are happy to support your project in Utopian.
I agree with the two points (especially the first one). Thanks a lot for the return! I will think about it for the next episode and try to format it better. :)