Hi @Sargoon,
Thank you for your contribution. I can see that you are making improvement in the text presentation of the tutorial but the video quality needs to improve.
Your voice over is more difficult to listen to this time and one really needs to concentrate hard. You need to work on your diction and pronunciation so that your words come out clearly. Also the audio needs to improve as your sounds are very faint some time even when the volume is turned to maximum. Spend some time to invest on a better microphone.
As this is 'video tutorial', excellent audio plays a significant role. It is important that learners want to stay engaged as they listen to your speech presentation.
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Rosa
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Thank you for your comment. I work on pronunciation and diction to make better contributions, I also work on text and presentation. I ordered a new microphone to make better quality contributions, it will come in this week. Thank you very much for your suggestions, I will consider all your suggestions.