We need more education-type posts on steemit I think, so, I approve!
Your advice is rather .. bare bones! I personally I'm more interested in the molecules rather than the organism, let's say. Like how to write a good sentence. Or if not down to sentence-level, maybe paragraph level? Or generally something more specific, like how to create movement in a scene, surprise, whatever.
The "indented" part is well-written. Is that from a book of yours, or something you wrote for this post?
I'll think on how to get those lessons across. I have to deconstruct my writing so I can tell you about them, you see.
Yes, the indented part is from my first novel, Deadlier Than The Male.