You showed your skill in this section by the way you underplayed it, avoiding the temptation to make it more dramatic. Of course, it is this kind of writing that makes the story more real for the reader.
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Thanks Alex. I think it's part of my curious learning that I know how these things go down. Sometimes spending too much time around gangbangers sours you and makes you wary - a prison warden saw that side of me and it makes me wonder if one can write about life without having a shadow side.