This is one well crafted story. It is yours, the black goo signature is there. The fear is at times very real and palpable, at least she is learning, and fighting for a way out, but with your writing, I'm not sure she will. This really is an engrossing horror story, and I generally tend to shy away from horror stories.
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I write for the enjoyment of appreciative fans like you. :3