Thank you, I am a big fan of things like 28 days later, I read this back now and really don't know how I managed to write it!
That is some really useful feedback. I don't know why I tend not to break stuff up, I just never thought about it really, I just post what I have. Sincerely, thank you!
The idea of a collective book was one I had a while ago, I think it was somewhat inspired by the movie The Zombie Diaries, which follows different groups of people, but got me thinking about a collective diary of the apocalypse.
I have been thinking about maybe looking for other people to write some of the other accounts in it, I would like to do a few myself, but the stories of people met along the way could work quite well being done by others. Eventually, if I end up with a complete story, I would like to make it into a book, with fake newspaper clippings etc, just need to get down to it and write a bit more myself!
word. check out world war z if you haven't already. it'll give you plenty of ideas to do a spin on
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/World_War_Z
I have seen the movie, but haven't read the book, i will have to check it out :)