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RE: The Story of Supernatural Fiction "The Bear Ollo"

in #writing5 years ago

Your characters are charming - I Ollo's childlike curiosity and sense of ownership: **"I want to know if there is a tree on the moon. Besides that, I want to pick a small star in the sky for me to keep. * And I like the solution his friends offer. Lovely!