This story is now my personal favourite. It is very well written. The reader can feel the emotions of the three men in the cave...
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This story is now my personal favourite. It is very well written. The reader can feel the emotions of the three men in the cave...
thanks, Ceci - and the narrator is conflicted. In the moment, he's terrified, but in retrospect he regains his perspective. Despite his convictions he realizes being in the presence of evil is harrowing.
This is one of my favorites as well. Re the sulphurous smell....I think you need to add a bit of methane into that mix as well - gehenna is a garbage dump after all and the smell of demonic activity is more than the scent of spent matches, in my opinion.
yes, I mean what can you say about a being who wears a dung cap?
Now that's a picture I will quickly remove from my mind.....ew