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RE: [Original Novella] Perfect Enemy, Part 1

in #writing8 years ago

Every culture around the world, throughout history, cultivated an art of fighting.

What a great way to start a new piece. It hooked me already from the very beginning.

And then i find things like this:

He had a relationship with this thing, one built on morbid fascination but a relationship nonetheless. He was determined to eat it against his better judgement, and it was determined to resist all attempts at digestion. A worthy adversary.

And i knew this was going to be something awesome...