The beauty of this work is that it's the undiluted truth from the heart.
As par construction, I honestly feel you could make this look better with markdowns.
As par meaning and relativity, yea, we've all been there.
This is good! I anticipate bigger from you.
I was not inspired so didnt have the vibe fir mark down!
No wonder. But then, don't post if it ain't good enough. Personal advice. You dunno which of your posts will catch "someone's" attention.
Every post should be top notch.
I see no problem with the mark down bros. Please point it out. Thos is how the work is supposed to look for me. Maybe you have better idea